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Description: Healer. Summer Sky to Blood Opal. Played by Haloriel.

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Alazne Orellana
« on: Feb 03, 19, 07:15:05 PM »
The Basics

Character Name: Alazne Orellana
Nicknames: Azne, Lazne, Baby Girl
Age and Birth Year: 25 | 169
Race:  1/2 Short Lived, 1/2 Long Lived
Caste: Healer
Birth Territory: Goth, Little Terreille, Kaeleer
Home Territory: Goth, Little Terreille, Kaeleer


Birthright Jewel: Cut Summer Sky
Offering Jewel: Cut Blood Opal

Role: Bartender

Appearance


Play By: Cardi B (Belcalis Almanzar)
Distinguishing Features: Natural hair is curly brown that the Healer tends to dye anywhere from a bright blonde to a sharp blue, as well as glamour different lengths. Her eyes are brown with golden flecks as marks of her blended heritage.


Personality


Personality: As a Healer, Lazne cares about the people she’s surrounded by, and her job as a bartender offers the easiest way for some folks to pour out their troubles who can’t afford a fancy therapist. Compassion is a natural part of her interactions with other people even though Alazne is not the sort to wear her heart on her sleeve due to growing up in the rougher, gang-controlled areas of Goth. She's a passionate woman as much as any of the Blood are with even a little deeper of Jewel rank and does her best to gain some release of tension with dance, and a little of a music appreciation, though wouldn't remotely call herself any sort of performer unless it refers to her skill to make a drink.

The call of being a Healer pulls at her in bursts due to the sheer number of people not able to pay for aid, and she deals with that anxiety by volunteering herself to the people that know to come to her. Being a Bartender just seemed one of those natural extensions of her Healer Caste that made sense when the money was a little too tight. She's always thrilled with blending the drinks regulars like exactly the way they want them, while the tips are almost always out of this world if the regular pay isn't anything to sneeze at. While more than capable of self-defence in a physical sense, Alazne flinches at the use of Craft to harm someone even if they've earned it. She's gifted enough in terms of Craft that passions come a little easier to the Healer, and she's had a few casual lovers, but hardly anything in any sense of permanence.

Being in the middle ground of the way a lot of things stand in Goth suits Lazne. She likes to ease bruises where she can, and weave fresh squeezed and preserved fruit into her tonics so that they taste good especially for people that can barely manage to rub two marks together and call it a profit. Alazne is grateful and finds herself relieved at her Middling Jewels, which mean that she needn't suffer from mood swings that are difficult to control or fight to Heal a terribly delicate wound needing soft, gentle handling. The Blood Opal Offering she possesses offers enough focus to attend to, as it is.

The benefits of slightly more power and the ability to tend the occasional patient calling upon her skill set, or a chance to pass along a tonic for free for those that can afford it but are deeply in need soothes the ache to Heal. Alazne likes to pretend to offer an aloof presence because of where she lives in Goth, but it is needy children most of all which turn her head. Being intensely focused and driven is another manner in which her Blood Opal Offering manifests itself, Alazne would never take a job that she couldn't see herself able to finish within a reasonable amount of time, while attention to professionalism is another, even if it is rather quiet in form.

Having an awareness of the people around her and more particularly, what they need and won't feel comfortable explaining is practically second nature, so long as it isn't hidden with more rare, Darker Jewelled Craft. She's grateful for her Caste even while understanding how rare they are, in part because while some need to, and some want to sell their bodies, Lazne was never forced into that position, because she's always had something even the bad guys needed more.


Likes:
  • 1 Hair Dyes and Glamours: Alazne loves colours in her clothes, hair, shoes. The more she can get, the better. The louder the hues are, the more exciting. Her father always wore exciting suits, and when she was very small she didn't understand the money came from somewhere very bad, she loved the bronze, red, and bright blues he had a tendency to wear which matched the man's smooth, almost larger than life personality. Her colourful hair is a tribute to her parents' love, even if sometimes she'll admit she spends a little too much of her tips on glamours.

  • 2 Warm Knit Items: While she prefers to dress to impress, there's honestly nothing better than a warm afghan to keep warm when the winter winds are howling outside. More than that, Lazne has always been thankful for having a place to live, even if it was a bit on the shabby side. Cute gloves and socks are always the way to go when it's cold, and now, she likes to make them.

  • 3 Winsol: The best holiday and the most solemn. Her father passed away during Winsol, so it's a bittersweet time that she is careful not to take for granted because people die. Alazne does her best to keep her old man's promise that she remembers him. Keeping the quiet, subdued vigil and lighting candles while hoping for the best into the year to come pleases Lazne. The food too, that she saves the whole year to make is a major plus.

    Dislikes:
  • 1 Bullies: Because she lives near and around an area of Goth that really finds itself wanting for safe surroundings at times, there is often more than her neighbourhoods' fair share of bullies and people that are more than adult enough not to take advantage of others. Trouble is, while she understands that there are quite a lot of desperate desperate people, Alazne wishes more of them would just stop trying to blackmail and hurt others to take their arguably average earnings to give themselves more. People that are more well off, she notices, also get lucky and have it generally safer.

  • 2 Cheaters: There are many kinds of cheaters. Ones that skim a little off the top and think the boss won't notice. Men and women both that dip out on a spouse that no one forced them to have in the first place. Lazne is really just not a fan, feeling nothing but derision for these kids of weak-willed people. They are the ones that typically had the Gangs up in arms delivering out more violence than the protection they always claim everyone needs, and worse, are everywhere from the Territory Court down to the Port Authority, Laz assumes, stopping good people from actually making things better.

  • 3 Power Vacuums: While Alazne is glad that the Hell Lords en masse are gone, she frets about the balance of power and what will end up filling it, because of the fact that its never the good guys. Even if she loved her father and some cousins, they were still wrong for being involved and the Healer knows that. There are a lot of dirty practices that can't be shifted even a few centimetres with any force that will just find another way to keep doing the same things they have been, but maybe worse.

    Fears:
  • 1 Hell Lords' Return: So, the seemingly biggest bad took out two major pieces of the city causing issues and while people don't come back from the dead, Lazne is by no means convinced anyone has seen the last of the Hell Lords. The trouble with truly bad people is that they don't tend to care who gets hurt. Alazne's experience with this is with her father, and while she loved him, stopping from taking part wouldn't have been possible unless the man was dead. She knows a lot of men like this, and even women which aren't enough usually to counter the few people in the middle of bad business that might have meant well originally. With her father dead, Laz and her mother are finally a little safe, but it terrifies the Healer that like life, it's temporary.

  • 2 Snitching: While there's a part of her that would love to be brave and talk to the authorities about things she sees as some people might choose to do, Lazne can't. Some might call it won't. The Courts won't be there when some of those men and women are done serving their time and have a long list of the people that helped turn them in. They aren't there when the ladies loyal to the men that can't seem to earn enough money end up having those bad tempers taken out on their children and lovers. She's healed countless broken bones and been paid for her silence a lot since learning how to properly use her Healing skills, and not a single member of any Court could convince Lazne to give a single name. Running and being truly terrorized for the rest of her life isn't worth it.

  • 3 Debts Owed: Sometimes, Alazne is afraid of accepting to heal the wrong person, like the enemy of someone's upper-level employer. Mistakes like that can bring unwanted attention and its the absolute last thing the Healer has ever wanted. While in some manner she's aware that technically speaking, she could move away, find a place that better valued her talents, Lazne feels like she owes her neighbourhood to stay as long as she possibly can, but she's not sure if she has enough life and power to pay back everything. It scares her that she's going to end up dead and forgotten like so many.

    Craft Strengths:
  • 1 Reverse Healing: Her best skill is subtly re-opening old wounds that have been either poorly healed or have gone septic due to bad mending. She uses a blend of very delicate Craft to tease apart the flesh, muscle and bone repositioning and organ repairing to seal a variety of wounds more cleanly. Her Light Jewels aid in very delicate body parts, such as feminine complaints, and small children with organ or limb issues.

  • 2 Palatable Tonics and Pills: Having spent much of her time learning to tend Jewelless and Landen street children either expelled or run away from the various orphanages in Goth, Lazne's has become very good at making Healing tonics and pills that taste good, or that have a taste that can be hidden in a good meal. Some of them she often combines with temporary warming spells which are very efficient for the homeless in the winter.

    Craft Weaknesses:
  • 1 Power Bolts: These don't work at all. Alazne might as well be Jewelless when it comes to Power Bolts.
  • 2 Emotional Manipulation: While an incredibly useful Craft for a Healer especially when dealing with patients and loved ones in or near panic, the best Lazne has learned how to do is a light soothing that either goes well or doesn't work at all.


    Life Story

    Family:
    Mother: Evana Orellana, witch, Summer Sky-Green, 1/4 Dhemlanese, 1/4 Hayllian, 1/2 Dharoan, Courtesan. 175 | 19 AP

    Father: Grantham Richards, Prince, Tiger Eye-Rose, 1/2 Short Lived. 1/2 Long Lived. (Dhemlanese), Hell Lords Member, Deceased

    Bodyguards and Associates: Ignacio Valentino, Prince, Blood Opal - Sapphire, ex-Hell Lord, 1/4 Long Lived (Hayllian), Family Friend. 192 | 2 AP


    History: Unlike a lot of girls that grew up in really hard and rough places like some of the life long friends' she's made in various parts of Goth with, or without connections to the Gangs and other parts of the underground not-so-legal scene, Alazne Orellana had a good life as a young girl. While she grew up in one of the roughest neighbourhoods, for some reason, her father always kept one of the nicest houses on the block and no one was willing at the time to explain exactly why that was, and she, of course, was small enough for a time that it wasn't something a child would question insistently.

    Instead, she'd give away her good gloves and hat when playing outside just after turning three and her caregivers back were turned, or one was busy with another task. Additionally, the smallest blankets in the house would go missing, as it was all that Alazne could carry without alerting a maid, her nanny, or the cook, who were paid to remain in the house and attend to home and child when the Lady Evana wasn't home. During the deepest part of winter that year, her mother got really exhausted with the news of her daughter just giving things away. It was at this point when she'd realized with all the business her Hell Lords' lover had her wrapped up in that she'd completely missed the development of her daughter's Healer Caste due to not being home at the time.

    Notes that the sitter sent to both parents regarding the Caste development, in particular, had continually gone unanswered, which Evana didn't find until afterward, even the cook had eventually tried to get the Lady Evana's attention and failed to do so. At the time, Grantham was mostly outside of the home, which would eventually become a little of a pattern. Her mother assumed the 'late' development is due to her daughter being born of a very, very hard birth that was quite a bit early, but it is unlikely to be true. Alazne has always assumed its wishful thinking and motherly nitpicking, as her mother's suggestion isn't factually possible.

    The scolding by Evana Orellana began with turned to a tight hug and lots of tears as her daughter explained they had more than everyone else, so she wanted to help. It wasn't long after that Alazne came away from her Birthright Ceremony with a warm, cut Summer Sky. The Jewel reminded the young Healer of her father's eyes, despite how anxious Grantham Richards made her mother seem to feel. Even now after the man's death, there's a certain something wistful about it all and missing the man her father might have been without the ties to and with the Hell Lords. They had connected due to a shared Dhemlanese heritage primarily native to Little Terreille initially, before crimes and shady business was involved in Grantham's life.

    That was the first time Evana was anxious about the life she'd birthed a child in the middle of, and as a result, turned into something of a helicopter parent to her daughter's exasperation. Like other kids, she went to school and cut the classes she thought were boring and begged her mother to wear regular clothes instead of the extremely nice things her father wanted her to wear to show off. It all scraped hard against the developing compassion, seeing anyone go hungry or not have quite enough. Summertime was easier because at least it wasn't cold outside and when it rained it was warm, and then she could give away sandwiches and cookies to the kids that wanted them when everyone knew the local orphanages' food was pretty much for the birds. Those early days of Lazne's started her on a pattern long before she began to really dive deeper into learning how to Heal because the warmth of a Healer was about more than just saying thank you or not laughing when someone was bullied, but it was a start.

    Alazne, in her time as a young woman trying to escape the truth of her parents being into shady optics in Goth, she befriended a fair number of orphan girls and others that started out on the streets and despite the challenge, made something better for and of themselves than it might have been expected. Due to some of the violence and street business, she's seen, Lazne is still convinced due to the number of girls that ran off from the orphanages and didn't succeed that the matrons were corrupt in vile ways and still are. That said, it isn't as if she's been able to prove her theory, which isn't the kind of thing one might share over a morning hangover fix.

    Some people that ended up hurt were the greater influence in her goals to get even further Healing training due to the fact that her deeper suspicions were confirmed when young that her father had a hand in a fair portion of the violence in the neighbourhood as a middling-upper level Hell Lord. As much as she loved him and couldn't stop him, she could do this much without frightening her mother, who wanted far better for her than involvement with the Gangs of Goth. Just being at home was a constant conflict of interest, Lazne could never just decide to leave, because of the gains.

    Sometimes, when her father and mother were away on so-called business trips, she'd beg for various friends to come and stay at the house for as long as she possibly could for some company. It was lonely sometimes due to all of her elder siblings being either in Dhemlan, or just older and too busy for Alazne. It took years to for Lazne to figure out exactly what her father's business was, and by the time she understood even a portion of it, such as his laundering money and selling safframate, she'd already been fairly accustomed to never asking too many questions about times he often left the family home in rushed form, or wouldn't be seen for weeks.

    While her father did his best to keep the more violent details and concerns he dealt with regarding Hell Lord business, Alazne eventually noticed the strain it caused on her parents' relationship, and how some of their 'older family friends' very often ended up dead. It made her extra grateful and relieved when she could go to a proper Priestess with a ceremony for her Offering, coming back with a Cut Blood Opal, and that before it, she practically had her pick of the better men around for her Virgin Night.

    It was a month afterward that her mother shipped her off to Dhemlan, Kaeleer to live with distant family in Amdarh while she learned from a tutor enough to catch up for the purpose of attending university. Taking a year to catch up on education she'd lacked or ignored made all the more clear what her mother was trying to get Lazne away from. For four years, she focused her education upon primarily undoing damaged or poorly formed scar tissue and bone, writing a thesis upon the topic as in the completion of her studies, while she only has only just returned to Goth, slipping into the city with one of her mother's usual travels from Dhemlan to Goth to avoid being pressed into Court Service. After Alazne finished her education in Healing at Salamanca University due to her mother's connections and her father's questionable money, she's tried to drum up as much as nest egg as possible so she needing lean on her parents bloodied savings, as she calls it. Her father might be dead, but he did leave her and her mother a considerable sum of money. Lazne just shudders at needing to make use of it.

    It was for all the people that often ended up grist in the Hell Lords' mill and as either victims, working for them or both, or those that didn't that didn't survive and hadn't been able to be nearly as strong, that she can't bring herself to do anything other than try to get by things honestly. She's come back home to stay in Goth because sometimes hard choices were the better ones. But sometimes, she's anxious about it and isn't very sure of where to go from this point. What does a girl that's good at making a flashy drink do next?


    Show Us What You've Got

    Character in Play: The tips she got to keep entirely, and tonight had been really good. Alazne had noticed the drop in the tips after the Hell Lords' had been obliterated, and the first thing that had pissed her off had been the serious drop in tips. She'd gone from having 100 Marks' in her pocket to 20s, which depending on how much they were fleeced for in a month occasionally wasn't enough to keep the heat on. Lately, however, the money had been trickling back, which confirmed a thought and increased a concern. She tapped her foot to the muted bass, this particular bar was finally closed for the night and the rest of the staff were busy cleaning, but even if she was honest there probably wasn't enough Craft in the whole world to do anything about those floors.

    Still trying to make money, Lazne worked at as many bars as she could stand while Healing on the side. Sure, maybe those priorities were in the reverse, but the number of tips that she could get often exceeded what she could make as a Healer without any fancy Court connections. Even while learning all about her Caste from people that were fully Dhemlanese, Court connections were such a very distant kind of idea to Lazne. She understood Protocol mostly in the sense of 'who was going to get angry first and how to steer clear of which of the Blood could hurt you more.

    Taking a soft breath, she rolled up several marks and tucked them in her pants pocket. Though closed, there were a few men from various organizations that took advantage of staying later for business. On those nights, Alazne kept her eyes down, and mind on the drinks and nothing else, making use of another purchased glamour to make her face appear pockmarked. Thankfully, it was enough to make them leave her alone.

    Tonight wasn't the time to be colourful, but Alazne missed the ability to dress completely herself the way she preferred on nights like this. However, the Healer and Bartender simply accepted that this was the way of life in this particular portion of Goth and there really wasn't anything anyone could do about it. So, she focused on the sweeter things, like the tips, and appreciative customers regardless of where those customers had come from before they arrived. Hopefully, there wouldn't be too many girls that needed her services as a Healer before they truly closed up to all customers, and just as a Bartender for a little nightcap before heading home.

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Re: Alazne Orellana
« Reply #1 on: Feb 03, 19, 07:17:06 PM »
Could I get a General Roll and Five family rolls, please? Thank you kindly.  8) :)
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Re: Alazne Orellana
« Reply #2 on: Feb 03, 19, 09:51:13 PM »
Weighed by Mother Night...

You've risen from the Darkness twice blessed with a cut Tiger Eye Birthright Jewel, and were gifted with an uncut Summer Sky Jewel at your Offering.

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Re: Alazne Orellana
« Reply #3 on: Feb 19, 19, 09:20:56 PM »
Discard that Tiger Eye - Summer Sky as of this purchase, please. Thank you!

And I'd like to try for a new General Roll, please. I already have a Healer with that same set.
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« Reply #4 on: Feb 20, 19, 08:17:07 AM »
Weighed by Mother Night...

You've risen from the Darkness twice blessed with a cut Summer Sky Birthright Jewel, and were gifted with a cut Green Jewel at your Offering.

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Re: Alazne Orellana
« Reply #5 on: Feb 20, 19, 05:59:20 PM »
Pretty pretty! Could I have this Summer Sky-Green reduced to Summer Sky-Blood Opal, please? -happy dance-
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« Reply #6 on: Feb 20, 19, 11:03:18 PM »
Weighed by Mother Night...

You've risen from the Darkness twice blessed with a cut Summer Sky Birthright Jewel, and were gifted with a cut Blood Opal Jewel at your Offering.

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Re: Alazne Orellana
« Reply #7 on: Feb 24, 19, 09:19:08 PM »
Ready for first pass review, please, and thank you very much for all the awesomeness!  8)  ;D
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« Reply #8 on: Feb 25, 19, 08:58:44 AM »
Added to the queue.
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Re: Alazne Orellana
« Reply #10 on: Mar 02, 19, 12:14:51 AM »
Changes marked in Blood Opal text, unnamed siblings removed.  8)

Ready for second review pass, ty!
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Re: Alazne Orellana
« Reply #12 on: Mar 04, 19, 12:02:28 PM »
And again!
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« Reply #14 on: Mar 05, 19, 01:44:27 PM »
Ready for Review.
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