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Author Topic: Jupiter Cinerus  (Read 3733 times)

Description: Warlord Prince. Summer Sky to Green. Played by Gavin.

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Jupiter Cinerus
« on: Dec 20, 16, 09:17:54 PM »
The Basics
Character Name: Jupiter Primus d’Maris- Cinerus
Nicknames: Peter
Age & Birthyear: 1315 (Born 1121 BP)
Race: Long-Lived (Hayllian)
Caste: Warlord Prince
Birth Territory: Faro, Hayll
Home Territory: Draega, Hayll

Birthright Jewel:  cut Summer Sky (per Lilith’s Sheet)
Offering Jewel:  uncut Green (per Lilith’s Sheet)

Role: First Circle
Faction: Territory Court

Appearance


Play By: Joseph Gordon-Levitt
Distinguishing Features:


Black hair cut short to keep it out of his eyes. Perfect posture making him seem far more regal, with liquid grace to match. Golden skin and golden eyes. Lean figure.

Personality


Personality:

In his youth, Jupiter Cinerus was an arrogant and wild young playboy who flaunted his status as a scion of the Hundred Families. In any young man, this would have been a serious character flaw on its own. Combined with the cold rage and volatile temperament of a Warlord Prince, Jupiter's friends often had to pull him off of some other young bravo for slights real or imagined while praying that his fury did not suddenly find a new target in them. In the most notable case of Jupiter's inability to keep a leash on his temper, a conflict with other scions on of the Hundred Families led to the deaths of two others in defense of his younger brother. Jupiter's Ruts were literally affairs of service. He would Rut, then provide the woman in question (once he knew her name) some token of thanks without further acknowledgement of the act.

Jupiter would have sullied his family's reputation further if not for the intervention of three people:

His Uncle Brutus, who impressed upon him the goal of being a credit to himself and the world around him.

His father, Brennan, who pointed out that Jupiter had earned none of the reputation he blackened with his actions, yet those actions would follow his children long after they were both gone.

And his mother, Lilith, whose disappointment in him was even more soul-crushing than his uncle’s reasoning and his father's embarrassment.

Jupiter devoted himself after that day toward mastering himself first, followed by the world around him. His capacity for violence isn't just close at hand; it's the default for almost every interaction he has with other people. Only his family members and a select number of friends don't set him on edge with preening or milquetoast bullshit pseudo-elegance. But Jupiter recognizes that his rage must be a weapon, like an sword or spear he uses, and that he alone is responsible for it's eruption. Over the past eight centuries, he has fashioned a bulwark against his constant rage that allows him to represent his family and his Queen with more decorum than he's exhibited in the past. Influenced by the example and writings of his Uncle Brutus, Hayllian Senator and power-player, Jupiter has devoted himself to the understanding and mastering of Blood Law and Protocol and its applications across the strata of Blood society.

Jupiter may someday sit in the senate seat for his family and he won't be unprepared when the time comes.

Jupiter’s adjusted outlook on life fuels his desire to epitomize all that is best about Hayll and the elite status of the Hundred Families. He whom is given much is asked for much and Jupiter will maximize his yield to society. Being a member of the Hundred Families granted him rights and privileges that most others will never know, while demanding that he use that power to help rebuild Hayll into a true bastion of power and strength in Terreille.

At the end of the day, however, Jupiter Cinerus is a man defined by his family and the company he keeps. Lilith, his mother, receives the part of him that is the strong and stable man his father was, tempered in the guise of the dutiful son who knows the woman she was before her violation at the hands of the Eyriens. She smiled more back then, and she didn't stare through him the way she does now. While Jupiter resents the seeming favor she lavishes on his half-brother and sister, he also does not speak of it. He disappointed her in the past and he is not what she needs. There is nothing more for it. 

His uncle, Brutus, is the surrogate father standing in place of the one he was robbed of by the Eyriens. Whenever he can make time to speak Brutus about the Senate or learn more about its proceedings, Jupiter does so with the same relish he often used in looking for fights. Brutus can't hold the Senate seat forever and, unless he changes his mind, Brutus has no children to pass his legacy onto. Being there for his uncle is the least he can do.

Gideon, his half-brother, causes no end of personal conflict and turmoil in Jupiter’s life. They share a love of learning, self-improvement, and even a Caste! They share a mother, siblings, aunts and uncles, and even a sister! Yet Jupiter cannot help seeing the other Warlord Prince as the wolf at the door, constantly seeking a means to supplant him and push him out of the family and take his place. Add in his hatred of Jupiter's Queen, Sabine, and the relationship between the brothers is strained long before his half-Eyrien heritage comes into play. Intellectually, Jupiter knows that Gideon is not his enemy, though he is a rival for their mother’s affections. He even knows that it isn't what Gideon wants (or is it?), but it's one of his few true insecurities. To that end, Gideon receives a healthy dose of civility and the height of Protocol-infused. But never friendship.

Keziah, his sister, reminds him of who his mother used to be and who he wishes she could be again. He tries not to be the preachy or overprotective older brother (Gideon appears to have that covered), but he is deeply interested in Keziah’s welfare.

Jupiter still keeps as close friends the surviving members of his Praetorian Guard unit from the war. Jupiter has dinner and drinks with them often, and they are a few of the people who know him the best.

Only a fool would pity an Ebon Gray Black Widow, so Jupiter keeps his love for his aunt Karlissa safely in the realm of respect and deep care. She suffered the loss of her brother and her freedom during the occupation, along with other indignities that he can only imagine. It’s a little disconcerting to be older than her, but she stands deeper in the Abyss than even his mother and father did, earning her a healthy respect from the Warlord Prince.

Jupiter's is conflicted where his Queen, Sabine, is concerned. She is a desirable woman and Jupiter believes that there is a good Queen beneath the veneer of spoiled and manipulative person Sabine puts forth. But then she allows horrible things like allow the slaughter of the Eyrien delegation and Jupiter loses just a little more hope for her each passing day.

And despite all of these people pulling him in different directions, despite the nice clothes and excellent manners, Jupiter's first and last instinct when solving problems is to unleash his rage and let Mother Night sort it out.

Likes:
  • 1.Physical Exertion: Despite all that he’s done over the years to rein in his fierce temper and darker urges, Jupiter is a Warlord Prince first, last, and always. Be it sexual conquest or combat, he loves the adrenaline rush of testing his body to its limits. It's the only way to know how and where to improve himself.

  • 2. Family: Jupiter’s family is the constant in his life, the bedrock keeping him grounded. Like many Hayllians, the Great War and the Purge cost Jupiter a large portion of his family. Each year, he spends an entire night in silent reflection and vigil for the members of his family that he’s lost. This act helps him appreciate his remaining family, whom he has pledged to keep together, no matter what. Even Gideon is included in this vow, as their mother’s blood runs through his veins.

  • 3. Other Cultures: Jupiter’s love of learning had lead to a love of other cultures. He owns a number of Raejian rugs and Dene Nehelian art, along with a bow from Shalador. When the short-lived can still build enduring works and produce men and women of quality, the long-lived have no excuses for their indolence and corruption.

    Dislikes:

  • 1. Hayll’s Corruption: Despite the best efforts of his Uncle and several reputable Senators, Hayll is ripe to the gills with corruption. Money that should be used for the people somehow finds its way into the hands of the Hundred Families and their cronies while the common man struggles to survive.  The Hundred Families themselves warp tradition and the laws to benefit themselves and call it “the way things ought to be”. Worse, men like Lucius Pullo buy and sell people like property and even his own Queen sends people to the Coliseum to die to sate bloodlust of others. Hayll is better than this but finding ways to prove remains a constant struggle for Jupiter.

  • 2. Slavery: Jupiter dislikes the practice of slavery, despite all of the money it has brought to his family. His mother is a principal investor in the Coliseum since before meeting his father and Jupiter grew up in the presence of slaves and his mother keeps them even now. He does not accept poor treatment of any servants in his presence and will firmly remind those with him to mind their manners.

  • 3. Nero: The Consul is a good man. He’s respected. He also has a warm relationship with Jupiter's Queen, and that bothers him. Does he want her body? Or is he just trying to promote the interests of his family above the rest of the Hundred? Jupiter has decided that none of it matters, but if Nero tries to harm Sabine or elevate himself above her, Jupiter will end him and pay the Price.


    Fears:

  • 1. Another Great War: For Jupiter, the sights, smells, and horrors of the war with Askavi were nightmare enough for one long-lived lifetime. There are few people he will readily discuss the war with. He lost an aunt, several cousins, and a number friends. And, in his heart of hearts, Jupiter knows the truth: Hayll didn't win. They didn't drive the Eyriens back. They were merely the recipients of good fortune that the Purge struck when it did. Next time, there won't be a Purge to save them all.

  • 2.The Disintegration of his family: Jupiter has already lost one brother in his lifetime. Despite their different fathers, Gideon and Keziah are pieces of his mother and Jupiter is compelled to honor that per his brother Anarius's last wish. Their deaths would wound Lilith and so Jupiter works to keep his his siblings safe or at least from dying. And there is a part of Jupiter that knows that should something befall their mother, Gideon and Keziah will be all that remains of her. Jupiter sees the Cinerus family moving in different directions and it scares him. Uncle Brutus works inside the Senate, Karlissa may or may not have just done something horrible, his mother grows colder and more distant each day, Keziah is training, and Gideon...is Gideon. Jupiter has taken it upon himself to hold his family together but he fears that his efforts won't be enough.

  • 3. Sabine is his Price: How many times did he act without thinking or inflict pain or death without considering the full implications of his actions? How many times did Anarius, or their father, try to counsel him to wiser action and go unheeded? Jupiter understand now how frustrating he must have been as he deals with his new Queen. She is shallow and generally unlikable despite the pull her feels toward her. She cares nothing for Hayll's rampant corruption or the other issues facing the people; give her a new sparkling object and she'll focus on it to the exclusion of all else. Every time Jupiter wants to rage at the injustice of being bonded to an overgrown child operating solely on their own whims...he realizes how angry he made Brennan all those centuries ago and shuts his damned mouth.

    Craft Strengths:

  • 1.Weapon Mastery: There is no such thing as a foreign weapon to Jupiter Cinerus. This branch of Combat Craft gives him an intuitive knowledge on the weight and balance of a weapon, allowing him to know the degree of its construction. It also grants him knowledge of how much force, speed, and strength a weapon can tolerate. This usually takes several seconds of study and handling to invoke. Unfamiliar weapons are not awkward in his grasp. Familiar weapons, like his family sword Dominion, are wielded with uncanny precision and skill. During the war, Jupiter killed more Eyrien Warriors with their own weapons than he did with Hayllian arms.

  • 2. Incite Rage: Jupiter has spent centuries mastering his rage and bringing it under his control. Through understanding of what provokes the Killing Edge in himself, he can bring other males to the Killing Edge even if they do not desire it.

    Craft Weaknesses:

  • 1. Reading Psychic Scents: Jupiter is a powerful combatant, but he has conditioned himself to fight no matter the circumstances. He is capable of reading the psychic scent of other Warlord Princes without difficulty. Other castes are nearly undetectable for him, however, leading to Jupiter’s need to approach situations with more care than he otherwise would.

  • 2. Power Bolts: Due to his unrepentant focus on armed combat skill,  Jupiter has let his skill with Power Bolts fall by the wayside. His power Bolts hit only half as hard as they should for a Warlord Prince of his jewel strength. Furthermore, his aim with his Power Bolts leaves much to be desired. Jupiter prefers to fight in melee combat whenever and wherever possible to avoid his issues with this Craft.


    Life Story

    Family:
    Mother: Lilith Cinerus - Green to Gray Black Widow, age 1777 (Born BP 1584)
    Father:  Brennan d’Maris - Green to Gray Prince (slain in retaliation for the attack on Askavi) per Karlissa’s Sheet

    Aunt : Karlissa d’Maris - Sapphire to Ebon Gray Black Widow, 1,089 [26]; Born 898 BP

    Uncle : Brutus Cinerus - Summer Sky to Broken Opal Prince, age 2,881 (Born 2690 BP)

    Siblings:

    Anarius Secundus d’Marius- Purple Dusk to Green Prince (deceased, killed in Purge) (per Lilith’s sheet
    Gideon Cinerus - Purple Dusk to Sapphire Priest Warlord Prince, age 325 (born 132 BP)
    Keziah Cinerus - White to Tiger Eye Priestess (22 y/o) (per Lilith’s sheet


    History:

    Jupiter Primus d’Maris-Cinerus is the first son of Brennan d’Maris and Lilith Cinerus, a member of the Hundred Families of Hayll as well as the grandson of the Queen of Faro. Lilith was still relatively young when Jupiter was born and it is this version of her that he remembers best. She told him stories, taught him deep respect for the role of females in his life, and endured the worst of his tantrums and mood swings as a burgeoning Warlord Prince. Jupiter considered himself his mother's protector from the moment he understood that such was one of the numerous roles of a Warlord Prince. Even today, it is this initial version of his mother that causes Jupiter such cognitive dissonance when dealing with the colder, darker woman that Lilith has become.

    His relationship with his father, Brennen was warm as well. The Prince understood well how to manage his wild, fiercely tempered son and often enlisted his mother’s brother, Brutus, in instructing the boy on representing the Prince side of his nature. Between his father’s love of history and tradition, and Brutus’s love of politics and service to the people of Hayll, Jupiter learned early on that his duty was to carry on the family name and strengthen the Cinerus reputation.

    He was honored to receive his Summer Sky at his Birthright Ceremony, followed by his Green, taking pride in sharing a Jewel with each of the three people he admired. One century later, he would share his Jewel of Rank with his brother, Anarius, bonding the pair even closer than their shared blood. Where one went, the other followed and while Jupiter knew that Anarius often took his cues from Jupiter’s behavior, it didn't temper his ever-growing desire to prove his superiority to anyone he could.

    His cousins, Brutus’s children, were excellent allies in helping Jupiter some find one kind of debauchery or another to engage in. When Anarius met Danica Grimaldi, Jupiter encouraged him to seduce the young Priestess despite knowing that she was engaged to another member of the Hundred Families, Prince Caspian Orsini. After all, they were Cinerus men. Why did someone else’s marriage contract matter to them?

    Anarius, however, didn't just engage in a fling with Danica. He got her with child and married her, ruining the contract that the Grimaldis had arranged with the Orsinis. When Anarius came to him in a panic, demanding to learn how to fight, Jupiter learned the truth. To cleanse their honor, Lord Caspian demanded a duel. Their champion versus Anarius. Understanding that they intended to murder his brother, Jupiter stood up for his brother.

    Jupiter killed not only Caspian Orsini, but also Damian Grimaldi when he attempted to ambush them.

    By the time they returned home, Brennan, Brutus, and Lilith knew everything. And they were waiting.

    Lilith voiced her disappointment in her eldest son and left the room. Somehow, that hurt even more than the dressing-down he received from Brutus. His work in the Senate was now hampered due to an alliance between the Grimaldis and the Orsinis. Brutus urged Jupiter to set a better example for his brother and be worthy of their family name.

    But it was his father’s wrath that pushed the Warlord Prince to cold rage. He defended his brother! They should be thanking him instead of reprimanding him! He and Anarius were Cinerus men and, therefore, easily worthy any ten of the other Hundred Families. That, in turn, drove Brennan over the edge. The Prince explained in biting detail how Jupiter’s membership in the Hundred Families was based on utter luck and not on any paltry deeds he’d done.

    Jupiter called his father an old man and a fool.

    Brennan forced Jupiter to join the Praetorian Guard and do actual work, rather than simply indulge himself with money he hadn't earned. Over time, he watched young bravos like himself, members of the Hundred Families, mistreat members of the common class and abuse their power. At first, he refused to acknowledge that he was capable of such behavior. Over the years, he grew to loathe the man that he was and vowed to change his ways. He studied the works of his uncle and several other thinkers, while learning to temper his rage under the harshest of commanders in the Guard. As word of the Eyrien advance made its way toward Hayll, Jupiter wondered if the war would truly come to Hayll’s doorstep. Hayll attempted a vicious direct assault upon Askavi, hoping to stop the war machine’s advance.

    It failed.

    The Eyriens, now more enraged than before, swept into Hayll and dominated it. Jupiter distinguished himself in combat against several Eyrien warriors, but eventually was taken prisoner. He expected to be publically executed and planned to fight to his last breath to deny the Eyriens further victories.

    Instead, he and Anarius were used as hostages to ensure Lilith’s good behavior by Jadar Denvo, an Eyrien warrior leading the attack. Jadar “married” Lilith and forced himself on her at his whim. Jupiter and Anarius burned with rage at their mother’s treatment, but were powerless to stop him. Even worse, the Eyriens murdered his father, Brennan, and his aunt, Iuliana, for the attack on Askavi. They captured his aunt, Karlissa, and forced the Ebon Gray Black Widow into servitude on pain of breaking her jewels and death. Brennen's death their  broke something of Anarius’s spirit, but Jupiter swore to himself that he’d slay Jadar, even if it took a thousand years to do the deed.

    For three centuries, his mother suffered. Jupiter nearly lost himself to his rage when his mother was forced to bear Jadar’s son, Gideon, and integrate him into the household. Bit by bit, his father’s mementos were destroyed and Jadar asserted his dominance over their family. Jupiter found himself unable to care for Gideon as he did Anarius, but Anarius constantly impressed upon him that Gideon had no more choice in his birth than their mother did. It was their duty to watch out for him, as he shared their mother’s blood. 

    Jupiter bided his time by working to master his rage. Jadar’s brothers often abused Lilith, hoping to provoke Jupiter into snapping and attacking them. But Jupiter understood that the moment he gave in to the bait, they’d murder him in front of his mother and call it his own fault. Instead, he studied his enemies and prayed to Mother Night that if she would only give him a moment, he would avenge his family and his people with all of the cold rage he possessed.

    Sometime later, the Purge struck and Jupiter found his opening.

    Jupiter believes Anarius protected him from the Purge. They both woke when they felt the oncoming rush of power, but Jupiter was already in poor shape from a particularly vicious session with Jadar's brothers when it happened and he passed out immediately. When he woke again, his brother was long dead. When Lilith released him from his bonds, the Warlord Prince took up his father’s sword, Dominion, and attacked Jadar’s brothers.

    He has enjoyed killing before, but never as much as he did murdering those two bastards.

    Initially, he felt Jadar and Faunian deserved the humiliation of being chained up for Lilith’s amusement, tormented and enslaved as they’d done to her for three hundred years. He hated slavery but in this one instance, his rage was deep enough to overtake his deeply held belief in order to avenge their family. In time, however, Jupiter’s rage chilled into a desire see Jadar dead for his crimes. So long as the Eyrien lived, his father's and brother's deaths went unavenged. Upon Jadar's recent death, Jupiter opened the bottle of brandy that his father was saving for the birth of Jupiter's first child and poured four glasses: one for himself, one for Brennen, one for Iuliana, and one for Anarius.

    Jupiter has no love for the Eyriens, yet he attempts courtesy toward Gideon as much for Anarius' sake as his mother’s. Without Anarius to look after, Jupiter must see to Gideon’s welfare and, now, their sister Keziah’s as well.

    His devotion to his family is conflicted by his recent Bonding with Sabine, the current Queen of Hayll. Simply put, he doesn't know how to feel about her, yet he is drawn to her in ways he can't voice. This puts him at odds with Gideon, who hates her with a passion. This strains his relationship with his half-brother while making him suspicious of his Queen. Something about Sabine is off, though Jupiter cannot put his finger on it.

    It's just one more treacherous relationship he must navigate in the daily currents of his life.


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    Rise, my son. We’re free.

    Five simple words packed with so much meaning that they were nearly meaningless. He was shirtles and laying on the cold, hard ground of the dungeon beneath their home. Jupiter nearly didn’t recognize his mother’s voice in his head on the thread between them. Something in her voice sounded colder, more raw, even older than her nearly eighteen centuries. Or perhaps it was something in Jupiter that was older and more broken that heard her that way. After all the indignities and horrors heaped on her by their Eyrien captors, he couldn’t begrudge his mother’s lack of empathy.

    All he knew now was that Anarius was dead and his bonds were broken.

    We do not have much time. Find me and we will avenge Anarius.

    Jupiter had never heard an idea so sweet. He stole through the house quickly and quietly, not wanting to alert any of their captors, but he needn’t have worried. Around each corner, members of Jadar’s warrior camp lay broken or dead on the floors of their estate. He rounded a corner and found a Warlord Prince crawling along the cold floor in utter shock, clutching shards of his broken Opal jewel in his hands. His wings twitched as though he was in pain, and he looked up as Jupiter approached, golden eyes holding a mixture of anger and fear.

    Jupiter summoned strength to his legs, lunged forward and drove his boot down into the Eyrien’s skull. He was rewarded with a sickening crunch, reminiscent of a ripe melon being smashed on the ground. He reached down to take the warrior’s sword and kept walking. He followed the corridor toward its end and kicked open the door to his father’s study. His eyes sighted his nominal tormentors, the brothers of Jadar Denvo, father to his brother Gideon and rapist of his mother.

    How did you get free?!” one of them asked.

    Jupiter’s only response was a sheen of ice coating the walls of the study, frosting over his father’s paintings. Coating the floor. Plunging the temperature down, down, down below anything the Eyriens were physically comfortable with.

    Still they fought.

    Jupiter saw his father’s blade, Dominus, in the south corner of the room and called it to his hand with Craft even as Jadar’s brothers charged at him. For too long, he’d pushed down the beast beneath his skin, drowned it in the river of his willpower for nearly three centuries while these monsters abused his mother, murdered his father, and slaughtered his people. Now, two of the bastards most responsible for those injustices roared their challenge and came at him.

    Jupiter Cinerus smiled.

    He did not enjoy killing Damian Grimaldi or Caspian Orsini, even when they tried to murder him and his brother. They were Hayllians and, in the end, he’d wronged them by not steering Anarius away from Danica Grimaldi. He hadn’t protected his brother then, nor had he protected his brother since. Now Anarius was gone and it was just him left to defend their mother.

    No. Not just you. Gideon.

    Gideon, who shared blood with these monsters.

    Gideon, who also shared blood with his mother.

    He had not enjoyed killing the others, but these two...these two, he’d let himself enjoy.

    Jupiter caught his father’s sword and lunged forward.

    He could leash his rage again later, bring it back under control.

    Right now, there was no reason to hold back.



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Re: Jupiter Cinerus
« Reply #1 on: Dec 20, 16, 09:19:44 PM »
As per family Jewels from Lilith's sheet.
Weighed by Mother Night...

You've risen from the Darkness twice blessed with a cut Summer Sky birthright Jewel, and were gifted with an uncut Green Jewel at your offering.

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Re: Jupiter Cinerus
« Reply #2 on: Dec 27, 16, 01:03:03 AM »
Ready for Review by:

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Re: Jupiter Cinerus
« Reply #3 on: Dec 27, 16, 09:56:50 AM »
Ready for Review by:

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Re: Jupiter Cinerus
« Reply #4 on: Dec 27, 16, 12:03:02 PM »
You were most definitely right to defend your brother -- but don't you think you should have also brought the rest of the family into this before it got this far? This could cost lives, Jupiter. Your brother's, yes, but also a delicate balance is being disrupted in Hayll. There are more lives than our own at stake. When did we ever teach you boys to just take what you wanted at any cost? *Considers that for a moment* When did we tell you to be stupid about it?

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Re: Jupiter Cinerus
« Reply #5 on: Dec 27, 16, 01:42:57 PM »
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Re: Jupiter Cinerus
« Reply #6 on: Dec 27, 16, 05:27:42 PM »
After phinn's review, this character is Ready for Review.

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« Reply #7 on: Dec 30, 16, 09:10:24 AM »

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« Reply #9 on: Jan 04, 17, 09:10:55 AM »

...but not yet approved for play!

You must bring your Dark and Light Jeweled characters to a 1:2 ratio before Jupiter can be moved into play. Reply to this thread again when you're ready!
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Re: Jupiter Cinerus
« Reply #10 on: Jan 04, 17, 09:54:26 AM »
Hello, I'd like to purchase a DJ Ratio slot as purchased here, for Jupiter.





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Re: Jupiter Cinerus
« Reply #11 on: Jan 04, 17, 11:46:35 AM »
Done!

Jupiter's approved for play.
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